Hi! Do you want to go to the cinema in Friday at 17:00? I want to see Captain America 2. You'll like it because there's lot of action and it's about superheroes. Let me know. Bye, Karla
Hello Pat! Have you got any plans for the next Saturday? I would like to go to the cinema with you on the next Saturday at quarter to four p.m. to watch The Parent Trap's film. This film is very beautiful and it is graceful. I thing that you will have a good time! Answer the email as soon as possible please. Love, Mireia.
Nice piece of writing. You have answered the first two questions quite clearly and the third one is somehow implied. There are some minor mistakes you should avoid in the future:
1) The article "the" in "the next Saturday" is not necessary. We simply say "Next Saturday"
2) The adjective "graceful" is a strange adjective when you refer to a film. I suppose you meant to say "funny"?
3) "thing" is "cosa". You should have said "think" (verb "pensar"), ok?
Well, and that's basically all. Congratulations for this nice email.
How about if on Saturday in the afternoon about five o’clock we will go to the cinema? We will go see “Ocho apellidos Vascos” is Spanish film. I have been told it is a very funny film and you learn things about such as Seville and the Basques people.
Hi Pat, We can meet on Saturday morning at 11am. How about we go to see "Malefica"? It's a fantasy film, but some scenes make you scary! I think you'll enjoy this film because it has a fantastic special effects that will make you impress. Have a good day, see you tomorrow BYE!
Dear Pat, How are you? I need to see you soon!! How about if we meet on Saturday for go to the cinema at 5pm? A lot of people recommend see "Eight Surnames Basques" because is a funny film and you laugh a lot. I think that is a perfect film for you because you always laugh! Write me soon, See you Pat
Hello Pat! Do you want to go to the cinema on Sunday afternoon? I think we can go see divergent, beacause there is a lot of excitement and suspens See you Pat,
There is just an important mistake in the final line. You say "I think you liked it" (in past)...but your friend hasn't seen the film yet so you should have used the future, alright? For example: "I think you will like it because it is..."
Hi Pat, We can meet on Saturday morning. We can go and see the film of "ocho apellidos Vascos". I think that you could like because it's very funny. Bye, ARIADNA
I would like to go to the cinema at 5.00 pm, but I can't, so we will go to the cinema at 8.00 pm. I would like see "Los ocho apellidos vascos". I would like us to see this film, because it is very funny.
Excellent task, Carla. You have written a very good email and you have included the answer for all the questions the task asked you to do. Congratulations and continue working hard... ;)
Excellent task, Pau! You have written a fantastic email and you have included the answers for all the questions in the task. Congratulations and continue working hard, alright? :)
You have written a fantastic email. Congratulations! There is only one minor mistake at the end of it. You should have written "because it is very interesting" and you forgot to put the pronoun IT.
But the rest is great so don't worry. Continue working hard, ok? :)
Hi!
ResponderEliminarDo you want to go to the cinema in Friday at 17:00? I want to see Captain America 2. You'll like it because there's lot of action and it's about superheroes.
Let me know.
Bye,
Karla
Dear Karla,
ResponderEliminarVery good writing. Only a couple of comments:
1) We use preposition ON with the days of the week (on Friday)
2) "There's A lot of action" (you forgot to add "a", ok?
And that's all. Congratulations for this fantastic piece of writing.
Bye! :)
Hello Pat!
ResponderEliminarHave you got any plans for the next Saturday? I would like to go to the cinema with you on the next Saturday at quarter to four p.m. to watch The Parent Trap's film. This film is very beautiful and it is graceful. I thing that you will have a good time! Answer the email as soon as possible please.
Love,
Mireia.
Dear Mireia,
ResponderEliminarNice piece of writing. You have answered the first two questions quite clearly and the third one is somehow implied. There are some minor mistakes you should avoid in the future:
1) The article "the" in "the next Saturday" is not necessary. We simply say "Next Saturday"
2) The adjective "graceful" is a strange adjective when you refer to a film. I suppose you meant to say "funny"?
3) "thing" is "cosa". You should have said "think" (verb "pensar"), ok?
Well, and that's basically all. Congratulations for this nice email.
Bye! :)
Hello Pat,
ResponderEliminarHow about if on Saturday in the afternoon about five o’clock we will go to the cinema?
We will go see “Ocho apellidos Vascos” is Spanish film. I have been told it is a very funny film and you learn things about such as Seville and the Basques people.
See you,
Mar
Dear Mar,
EliminarNice writing! There are some minor mistakes, though.
For example:
1) How about if we go to the cinema on Saturday at 5 o'clock in the afternoon? (this word order is more natural than the one you wrote in the email)
2) You can't say "we will go see". You should say: "We will see "Ocho apellidos bascos" which is a Spanish film".
3) In the last sentence "about" is not necessary, alright.
Continue working hard... ;)
Hi Pat,
EliminarWe can meet on Saturday morning at 11am.
How about we go to see "Malefica"? It's a fantasy film, but some scenes make you scary!
I think you'll enjoy this film because it has a fantastic special effects that will make you impress.
Have a good day, see you tomorrow
BYE!
Dear Carmen,
EliminarNice writing! There are just some minor mistakes you should avoid in the future.
For example:
1) We say "How about going...", ok?
2) You'll enjoy this film because it has fantastic special effects (you don't need to say "a fantastic special effects", ok?).
The rest is really good and clear so congratulations. ;)
Dear Pat,
ResponderEliminarHow are you? I need to see you soon!!
How about if we meet on Saturday for go to the cinema at 5pm?
A lot of people recommend see "Eight Surnames Basques" because is a funny film and you laugh a lot.
I think that is a perfect film for you because you always laugh!
Write me soon,
See you Pat
Lucia
Dear Lucía,
EliminarWell-done! (as usual). You have written a good email although there are some minor mistakes you should avoid in the future. For example:
1) The structure "How about + verb in -ing. Thus, we say: "How about meeting on Saturday to go to the cinema at 5 p.m.?"
2) ...because IT is (we need a subject for the verb "is", right?
3) Again, the same mistake in "I think that IT is a perfect film.
4) Finally, we say "Write to me soon", ok?
Well, and that's all. Nice writing. Keep on working hard! ;)
Dear Conchi,
EliminarThanks for told me the mistakes.
I'll learn for the next time!!
Thanks,
See you soon
Lucia
Hello Pat!
ResponderEliminarDo you want to go to the cinema on Sunday afternoon?
I think we can go see divergent,
beacause there is a lot of excitement and suspens
See you Pat,
Albert
Dear Albert,
EliminarWell-done! Straight to the point (as we say in English). Just an important mistake:
We say "I think we can go TO see "Divergent", ok?
Continue working hard... ;)
Hi Pat,
ResponderEliminarAre you free this Saturday?
I want to watch the film "Believe"
I think you liked it because it is a documentary of our favorite artist.
Bye,
Paula
Really good, Paula!
EliminarThere is just an important mistake in the final line. You say "I think you liked it" (in past)...but your friend hasn't seen the film yet so you should have used the future, alright? For example: "I think you will like it because it is..."
Continue working hard! ;)
Hi Pat,
ResponderEliminarWe can meet on Saturday morning. We can go and see the film of "ocho apellidos Vascos". I think that you could like because it's very funny.
Bye,
ARIADNA
Dear Ariadna,
EliminarWell-done! (as usual). There is just a minor mistake: we say "I think you could like IT because it's very funny", alright?
Continue working hard! ;)
Dear Pat,
ResponderEliminarI would like to go to the cinema at 5.00 pm, but I can't, so we will go to the cinema at 8.00 pm.
I would like see "Los ocho apellidos vascos".
I would like us to see this film, because it is very funny.
Bye,
Anna
Dear Anna,
EliminarReally good, as usual!
Just one mistake you should avoid in the future. We say "I would like TO see", ok?
Apart from that, the rest is really good. Congratulations and continue working hard.
thank you, Conchi
EliminarHi Pat,
ResponderEliminarWe can meet on Saturday at 5.15 p.m. I want to see " Lluvia de albóndigas". I think you would like it because it's about big food.
Bye,
Carla
Excellent task, Carla. You have written a very good email and you have included the answer for all the questions the task asked you to do. Congratulations and continue working hard... ;)
EliminarHi Pat,
ResponderEliminarWe can meet tomorrow at 6.00 p.m. I want to see divergent. I think you would like it because you have read all the books.
See you,
Pau
Excellent task, Pau! You have written a fantastic email and you have included the answers for all the questions in the task. Congratulations and continue working hard, alright? :)
EliminarHi Pat,
ResponderEliminarWe can meet tomorrow at 6.30. I want to see ( 8 apellidos vascos). I think you would like it because it's very funny.
see you torrow,
Judit
Dear Judit,
EliminarFantastic email! Congratulations! Continue working hard, ok? ;)
Hi Pat,
ResponderEliminarWe can meet on Tuesday at 7.00. I want to see "divergente". I would like to see this film because is very interesting.
See you soon,
Dani
Dear Dani,
EliminarYou have written a fantastic email. Congratulations! There is only one minor mistake at the end of it. You should have written "because it is very interesting" and you forgot to put the pronoun IT.
But the rest is great so don't worry. Continue working hard, ok? :)
Hi Pat
ResponderEliminarWe can go to the cinema at 7:00.I really want to watch Harry Poter.It is a great film. I am sure for that